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The given chart shows the percentage of educated degree holders in Australia in 2 years. Summarise the main information.

The given chart shows the percentage of educated degree holders in Australia in 2 years. Summarise the main information. QlMY3
The given chart illustrates the proportion of educated degree holders in a specific Nation in two years. Overall, It can be deemed that a total of six courses are provided in a Both charts. To be specific, PhD science was chose by much more students and PhD arts was selected by least percentum of students. After analysing it attentively it can be seen that 30% of qualified graduates had done their degree in PhD science in 2008 as compared to 13% in 1980. Whereas, The percentage of educated youth was inclined by 5% in PhD arts in the year 2008. Moreover in this is same period almost negligible difference was shown in Master Arts Chats further indicates that the proportion of first-degree arts pupils was dropped up to 11% in 2008. Alongwith this, The percentie of First-degree Science was also declined to 10%. Apart from this Master Science had same proportion of students in both years.
The
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given
chart illustrates the proportion of educated degree holders in a specific Nation in two years.

Overall
, It can
be deemed
that a total of six courses
are provided
in a Both charts. To be specific, PhD
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science
was
Consider using a past participle here: "chosen".
chose
by much more students and PhD arts
was selected
by least
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percentum
of students.

After
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analysing
it
attentively
it can be
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seen
that 30% of qualified graduates had done their degree in PhD
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science
in 2008 as compared to 13% in 1980.
“Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
, The percentage of educated youth
was inclined
by 5% in PhD arts in the year 2008.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Moreover
in this is same period almost negligible difference
was shown
in Master Arts

Chats
further
indicates that the proportion of
first
-degree arts pupils
was dropped
up to 11% in 2008.
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Alongwith
this, The
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percentie
of
First
-degree
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Science
was
also
declined to 10%. Apart from this Master
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Science
had same proportion of students in both years.
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IELTS academic The given chart shows the percentage of educated degree holders in Australia in 2 years. Summarise the main information.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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