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The given chart shows the percentage of educated degree holders in Australia in 2 years. Summarise the main information.

The given chart shows the percentage of educated degree holders in Australia in 2 years. Summarise the main information. QlMY3

The given chart illustrates the proportion of educated degree holders in a specific Nation in two years. Overall, It can be deemed that a total of six courses are provided in a Both charts. To be specific, PhD science was chose by much more students and PhD arts was selected by least percentum of students. After analysing it attentively it can be seen that 30% of qualified graduates had done their degree in PhD science in 2008 as compared to 13% in 1980. Whereas, The percentage of educated youth was inclined by 5% in PhD arts in the year 2008. Moreover in this is same period almost negligible difference was shown in Master Arts Chats further indicates that the proportion of first-degree arts pupils was dropped up to 11% in 2008. Alongwith this, The percentie of First-degree Science was also declined to 10%. Apart from this Master Science had same proportion of students in both years.

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given
 chart illustrates the proportion of educated degree holders in a specific Nation in two years.

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, It can be deemed
 that a total of six courses are provided
 in a Both charts. To be specific, PhD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
science
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chose
 by much more students and PhD arts was selected
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percentum
 of students.

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analysing
 it attentively
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seen
 that 30% of qualified graduates had done their degree in PhD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
science
 in 2008 as compared to 13% in 1980. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
, The percentage of educated youth was inclined
 by 5% in PhD arts in the year 2008. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 in this is same period almost negligible difference was shown
 in Master Arts

Chats further
 indicates that the proportion of first
-degree arts pupils was dropped
 up to 11% in 2008. Possible spelling mistake found.Along with
Alongwith
 this, The Possible spelling mistake found.percentile
percentie
 of First
-degree You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
Science
 was also
 declined to 10%. Apart from this Master You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationarttechniquesystemlearning
Science
 had same proportion of students in both years. 