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The given the graphs below illustrate the registration of students which go to study abroad and study in Australian universities over a ten year period .

The given the graphs below illustrate the registration of students which go to study abroad and study in Australian universities over a ten year period. PLXOw
The given the graphs below illustrate the registration of students which go to study abroad and study in Australian universities over a ten year period. In general, the number of overseas students tend to increase enormously. On the other hand, the number of local students go up and level off. As we can see the graph, total number of students which study in a foreign school such as Australian universities rise sharply, at 80000. After with overseas students, the local students also grow, and then remain stable, stand at 600000 Initially, figure for local students rise and level off, at 40000. The local students rise gradually reach over 200000 and then decrease under 200000, the line continue to increase barely
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tend to increase
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.
On the other hand
, the number of
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local
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go up and level off.

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which study in a foreign school such as Australian universities rise
sharply
, at 80000. After with overseas
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students
, the
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local
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also
grow, and then remain stable, stand at 600000

Initially
, figure for
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local
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students
rise and level off, at 40000. The
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local
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rise
gradually
reach over 200000 and then decrease under 200000, the line continue to increase
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IELTS academic The given the graphs below illustrate the registration of students which go to study abroad and study in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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