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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy which produced from six sources in a country from 1985 to 2003.

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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy which produced from six sources in a country from 1985 to 2003. Overall, there was a decline in the proportion of energy produced from oil and nuclear, while a rise was seen in the figures for natural gas, coal, and other renewable, and the figures for hydrogen remain unchanged. In addition, oil had the largest figure over the period shown. The share of oil using produced energy started at 52% in 1985, after which it saw a considerable fall to 39% in 2003. Similar changes, but to a lesser extent was seen in the figure for nuclear which a decline from 22% in 1985 to 17% in 2003. 13% of natural gas was produced in 1985, with subsequent steady growth to 23% in 2003. Similar changes were seen in the figures for coal and other renewable, which rose from 8% to 13% and from 1% to 4% respectively; meanwhile, hydrogen stay stable stood at 4% over the 18 periods.
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from six sources in a country from 1985 to 2003.

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from oil and nuclear, while a rise was
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in the
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for natural gas, coal, and other renewable, and the
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for hydrogen remain unchanged.
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, oil had the largest
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over the period shown.

The share of oil using
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energy
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a considerable fall to 39% in 2003. Similar
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to a lesser extent was
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for nuclear which a decline from 22% in 1985 to 17% in 2003.

13% of natural gas was
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in 1985, with subsequent steady growth to 23% in 2003. Similar
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were
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in the
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for coal and other renewable, which rose from 8% to 13% and from 1% to 4%
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; meanwhile, hydrogen stay stable stood at 4% over the 18 periods.
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy which produced from six sources in a country from 1985 to 2003.

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