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The bar chart how people are housed in the UK

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The bar chart depicts how people aged from 25 to 34 are housed in the UK over 10 years starting in 2004. Overall, renters and homeowners showed opposite trends with a sharp increase in renters percentages and a reciprocal decline in ownership. By the end of the period, overall occupant had overtaken ownership by a wide margin. In 2004, renters stood at around 20% compared with homeowners, which were at nearly 58%. From that point there was a steady rise in renters and decline in owners. landowner reached 55% in 2006 and climbed slowly to 56% previously falling to 52% in 2009. Renters rose approximately to 23% in 2005, remained there in 2006 prior to dramatically increasing to 31% in 2009. This trend continued for both percentages with a held steady from 2011 to 2012. Occupancy went up to 35%, 41% and 44% in 2010, 2011 and 2013, respectively. Likewise, owners decreased substantially to 45%, 42% and 40% in the same years. At the end of the period, landowner dipped to merely over 55% and renters rose to nearly 58%.
The bar chart depicts how
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people
aged from 25 to 34
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in the UK over 10 years starting in 2004.
Overall
,
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renters
and homeowners
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showed
opposite trends with a sharp increase in
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renters
percentages and a reciprocal decline in ownership. By the
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end
of the period,
overall
occupant had overtaken ownership by a wide margin.

In 2004,
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renters
stood at around 20% compared with homeowners, which were at
nearly
58%. From that point there was a steady rise in
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renters
and decline in owners.
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landowner
reached 55% in 2006 and climbed
slowly
to 56% previously falling to 52% in 2009.
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Renters
rose approximately to 23% in 2005, remained there in 2006 prior to
dramatically
increasing to 31% in 2009.

This trend continued for both percentages with a held steady from 2011 to 2012. Occupancy went up to 35%, 41% and 44% in 2010, 2011 and 2013,
respectively
.
Likewise
, owners decreased
substantially
to 45%, 42% and 40% in the same years. At the
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end
of the period, landowner dipped to
merely
over 55% and
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renters
rose to
nearly
58%.
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