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The given bar chart illustretes the proportion of British two genders who play 5 different type of sports (football, cycling, swimming, golf, and tennis).

The given bar chart illustretes the proportion of British two genders who play 5 different type of sports (football, cycling, swimming, golf, and tennis). 75M1b
The given bar chart illustretes the proportion of British two genders who play 5 different type of sports (football, cycling, swimming, golf, and tennis). Overall, cycling was the most popular sport for both genders, whereas the least number of boys and grils preffer golf. In terms of football, the boys attend most this type of sport, with 80% while girls don't attend as many as boys at 20%. As for cycling, its figure was one of the highest for both the boys and the girls of just belowe 60% and 50% respectively. Similarly, the swimming had higher percentage compare to other sports. Its percent for boys roughly 48% and for girls just above 50%. According to the other ramaining sports, the golf was the least lovely sport for two generation, with around 10% for both of them. About 35% of girls participate for tennis clubs while just above 30% of boys attend to this type of sport.
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for both genders, whereas the least number of
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at 20%. As for cycling, its figure was one of the highest for both the
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, the golf was the least lovely
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for two generation, with around 10% for both of them. About 35% of
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participate for tennis clubs while
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IELTS academic The given bar chart illustretes the proportion of British two genders who play 5 different type of sports (football, cycling, swimming, golf, and tennis).

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