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How water works in nature

How water works in nature K3EN6
The diagram illustrates information about how water cycle works on earth and how fresh water cone. Overall, it can be seen that the process involved various stages. begin with oceans and end with the fresh water. Looking at the diagram, it is crystal clear that 97% of water come from cloud and as rain in oceans which were following several steps and reached the individuals consumption. On the other hand, among the 97 % of water merely 3%of fresh water used by people. And the 77 percent of water frozen in cooled areas. Next the 22 proportion groundwater wich were consumed by soil. Moving further, only 1%of water in lakes and rivers and streams. all water stored in oceans and then separetely divided in other areas. finally the water cycle work in nature with number of steps. and people used as various.
The diagram illustrates information about how
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cycle works on earth and how fresh
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cone.
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, it can be
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seen
that the process involved various stages.
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begin
with oceans and
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end
with the fresh
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. Looking at the diagram, it is crystal
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clear
that 97% of
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come
from cloud and as rain in oceans which were following several steps and reached the
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individuals
consumption.
On the other hand
, among the 97 % of
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merely
3%of fresh
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used
by
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people
. And the 77 percent of
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frozen in cooled areas.
Next
the 22 proportion groundwater
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wich
were consumed
by soil. Moving
further
,
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only
1%of
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in lakes and rivers and streams.
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all
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stored in oceans and then
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separetely
divided in other areas.
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finally
the
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cycle work in nature with number of steps.
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and
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people
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as various.
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IELTS academic How water works in nature

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  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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