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The following two are filter system.

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The given process compares the steps of two differents filter system for purifying water. Overall, it can be seen that there is a two simple and cheap method for water purify. The basic formula for water purify is same in both system. In the cross-section filter, there is a 200-litre container which has an inlet on the top. The third part of the container has sand, where through the inlet water is sent and is filtered. Below the send are layers of tiny stones and after the layers are pipes with hols. water passed through the three layers the water is used for household purpose In the second system, the untreated water is stored in a container that has a tap. When it is opened, the water is sent to the other container with sand. After that, the water is sent back to the storage in another container that has a tap from which the water is used for housework.
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process compares the steps of two
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filter system for purifying water.

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, it can be
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seen
that there is a two simple and
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cheap
method for
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water
purify. The basic formula for
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water
purify is same in both system.

In the cross-section filter, there is a
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200-litre
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container
which has an inlet on the top. The third part of the
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container
has sand, where through the inlet
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water
is
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sent
and
is filtered
. Below the
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send
are layers of tiny stones and after the layers are pipes with hols.
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water
passed through the three layers the
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water
is
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used
for household purpose

In the second system, the untreated
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water
is stored
in a
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container
that has a tap. When it
is opened
, the
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water
is
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sent
to the other
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container
with sand. After that, the
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water
is
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sent
back to the storage in another
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container
that has a tap from which the
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water
is
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used
for housework.

IELTS academic The following two are filter system.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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