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Some people are living the countryside to live in cities. Leaving only old people in the countryside What do you think are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this situations?

Some people are living the countryside to live in cities. Leaving only old people in the countryside What do you think are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this situations? MrAON
Today's most of people prefer to living in big cities. In contrast, old people still live in mall villages. The reason of this situation are the lifestyle and modern life changes. This essay discussion the reason of Leave the villige and stay in big cities and the suggest ways to control them. The main reason of that proplem is modern life. In the past people only work in simple jobs like farmers and livestock farmers. They didn't care about stady. Whereas, today peple Move to hometown to study and find strong jobs in several sections. As the result people move to big cities to be workers. This result impact to old people how can work out said and leaving alone in the village. Another reason is modern life requirement. We can do a lot to solve these issues. people can Chang the village life and devlope. One solution is improve the lifestyle in the village and provide big schools and universities. Also they can growing industrial areas. Another solution is provides places to build mals and shipps for shopping and spend interesting time. In sume up, most people shifted to big cities. They search for change lifestyle and find modern live. however improve the life in village and build modern village can solve that issue. In the decade a head, this problem will decrease and modern village will emerge.
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can solve that issue. In the decade a head, this problem will decrease and
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IELTS academic Some people are living the countryside to live in cities. Leaving only old people in the countryside What do you think are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this situations?

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229 words
5.5
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