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The following table shows the five sports that caused the most injuries among minors in an unspecified country in 2003. Summarize the given information by reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The following table shows the five sports that caused the most injuries among minors in an unspecified country in 2003. Summarize the given information by reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. 8QWAw
The given table lists the top injuries young people incurred in 2003 in five different sports, namely soccer, rugby, basketball, netball, and martial arts. Soccer was topped the list with by far the most injuries at 11, 100, while the number of those admitted to the hospital due to the seriousness of their injuries reached 7. 5% that year. Rugby came in second place, with 3, 900 injuries recorded, although it had a much higher percentage of hospital admittance at 11%. Players of basketball and netball were suffered a similar number of injuries at 3, 200 and 3, 000 respectively, although there were more serious injuries among basketball players, with 4% needing to go to hospital as compared to only 2, 5% for netball. Finally, minors were injured the least in martial arts, with only 850 incidences recorded, although 6% of these injuries result in hospital admittance. Overall, it was clear from this table that while soccer certainly had the highest number of injuries in 2003, it was in rugby that minors had been likeliest to suffer an injury serious enough to require hospital admittance.
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injuries
at 11, 100, while the number of those admitted to the
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hospital
due to the seriousness of their
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reached 7. 5% that year. Rugby came in second place, with 3, 900
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recorded, although it had a much higher percentage of
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hospital
admittance at 11%.

Players of basketball and netball
were suffered
a similar number of
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injuries
at 3, 200 and 3, 000
respectively
, although there were more serious
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injuries
among basketball players, with 4% needing to go to
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hospital
as compared to
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2, 5% for netball.
Finally
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the least in martial arts, with
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850 incidences recorded, although 6% of these
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admittance.

Overall
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in 2003, it was in rugby that minors had been likeliest to suffer an
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IELTS academic The following table shows the five sports that caused the most injuries among minors in an unspecified country in 2003. Summarize the given information by reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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