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The bar chart illustrates the information about the level of higher, secondary and primary education of Bulgarian plan ong to live in Bulgaria in 2012,2016,2018.it is depicted by rendered bar chart.

The bar chart illustrates the information about the level of higher, secondary and primary education of Bulgarian plan ong to live in Bulgaria in 2012, 2016, 2018. it is depicted by rendered bar chart. waNbm
To begin with, in 2012 the higher education is learnt by Bulgarian masses which was 17percent and in the followed year it increased 20 percent then, there was a dramatic decrease observed in the rate of higher education in Bulgaria it accounted for 9 percent. analyising the rest of data, in the first year the rate of secondary education take by Bulgarian 65%. where as, primary education stood on 18%. furthermore, in the second year there was slightly decrease nearly 16%. however, a tiny increase seen in primary education and in the end of the period it went down 59% nevertheless, there was dramatically rise up seen in lower education which was above thirty. To sum up,
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by Bulgarian masses which was 17percent and in the followed year it increased 20 percent then, there was a dramatic decrease observed in the rate of higher
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in Bulgaria it accounted for 9 percent.
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analyising
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take by Bulgarian 65%.
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stood on 18%.
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and in the
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of the period it went down 59%
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which was above thirty. To sum up,

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