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line graph The number of books read at Burnaby Public Library

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The graph compares the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library over the course of 3 years, between 2011 and 2014. Overall, there were a rise the number of books read by men, while women witnessed a fall during the period in question, besides the number of books read by men overtook read by women after 2013. At first the number of books read by women rise to roughly 10, 000 between 2011 and 2013, so this year reached a peak of 10, 000. after 2013 theirs number will decline. The graph illustrates the number of books read by men at the beginning about 3000 in 2011, but after this year will surge. each other will equal in 2013. reach a peak of just over 14, 000 in 2014.
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