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Levels of education in Glasgow

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The given chart illustrates the information for levels of education in Glasgow, in 2010, which is situated in Scotland. Here, two charts are given chart A explains the information of educational level by age whereas chart B illustrates the information by gender. According to the given chart 32% Men are having their highest qualification as College degree on the other hand only 29% Women are having their highest qualification as College degree. According to the chart A, maximum College degree holders that is 76% fall under the age group of 24 to 35, on the other hand 72% individuals with no qualification comes under the age group of 75+. Whereas except two age groups 50-75 and 75+ rest in all other group only 9% individuals are having no qualifications. According to the given chart B, 38% women are having no qualification and only 35% men are no qualification, but 33% men and women both are having school certificate.
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illustrates the information for levels of education in Glasgow, in 2010, which
is situated
in Scotland. Here, two
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A
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B illustrates the information by gender. According to the
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32%
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their highest
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as College degree
on the other hand
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29% Women are
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their highest
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as College degree. According to the
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A, maximum College degree holders
that is
76% fall under the
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age
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of 24 to 35,
on the other hand
72% individuals with no
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qualification
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of 75+. Whereas except two
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50-75 and 75+ rest in all other
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9% individuals are
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no
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qualifications
. According to the
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B, 38% women are
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IELTS academic Levels of education in Glasgow

Academic
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6.0
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