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The following table and graph show the changes in forest cover in India and land usage in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

The following table and graph show the changes in forest cover in India and land usage in two different countries. YBMon
The table gives information about the changes in forest cover in India over the 100 year period while the pie chart compares land-using in India and Japan in 2011. It can be seen that both of table and pie chart has volatile data. The percentage of forest cover in India from 1880 to 1980 decline sharply, whereas the figures for using land in two countries. With regard to the table, the forest area during 100 years changed a lot by 12. 08% and the highest percentage was at 32. 12% in 1880. Between 1880 and 1920, the percentage of forest cover dropped moderately from 32. 12% to 29. 65%. 30 year later, there was a sharp fall in the area covers by the forest of 12. 3 million hectare, at which point this was the most decrease during the period. In the next 20 year, there was a mild decline in over the research period of 2. 56%, after which the percentage of forest cover hit the lowest point at 20. 2%. As can be seen the data from the pie chart, India had the greatest increase was recorded for agriculture and the new grassland, at 57% and 3, 5% respectively. Following by Japan with the figure being significantly lower, at 12, 5% in forest; However, dropped sharply at 19% in others compared with India.
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in India over the 100
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period while the pie chart compares land-using in India and Japan in 2011.

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seen
that both of table and pie chart has volatile data. The
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percentage
of
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forest
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cover
in India from 1880 to 1980 decline
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, whereas the figures for using land in two countries.

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forest
area during 100 years
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changed
a lot by 12. 08% and the highest
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percentage
was at 32. 12% in 1880. Between 1880 and 1920, the
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percentage
of
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dropped
moderately
from 32. 12% to 29. 65%. 30
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later, there was a sharp fall in the area
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covers
by the
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of 12. 3 million
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, at which point this was the most decrease during the period. In the
next
20
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year
, there was a mild decline in over the research period of 2. 56%, after which the
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percentage
of
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hit the lowest point at 20. 2%.

As can be
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seen
the data from the pie chart, India had the greatest increase
was recorded
for agriculture and the new grassland, at 57% and 3, 5%
respectively
. Following by Japan with the figure being
significantly
lower, at 12, 5% in
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;
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, dropped
sharply
at 19% in others compared with India.
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IELTS academic The following table and graph show the changes in forest cover in India and land usage in two different countries.

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