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The following maps demonstrate an overview of the recent transformation of the southwest airport and it clearly describes the prominent changes.

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The following maps demonstrate an overview of the recent transformation of the southwest airport and it clearly describes the prominent changes. Overall, before implementing new ideas, the southwest airport had been experienced no significant change; however, after undertaking some important steps, this place has been witnessed much more noticeable modifications. It is obvious from the maps that the most prominent changes has been witnessed shop, the elimination of walkway and the introduction of car hire. Most important renovation is that walkway has been replaced by Sky train on the northern part of the plan. Looking at the figure in more details, atm booth has been constructed eastern part of the plan for increasing number of citizen. The gates has been set up southern part of the plan. The check-in has been replaced by Bag drop. Cafe`has been build eastern part of the plan. Interestingly enough, the customs exhibited no considerable change over the period and remained as it was.
The following maps demonstrate an overview of the recent transformation of the southwest airport and it
clearly
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describes
the prominent
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changes
.

Overall
,
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before
implementing new
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ideas
, the southwest airport had
been experienced
no significant
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change
;
however
, after undertaking
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some
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important
steps, this place has
been witnessed
much more noticeable modifications.

It is obvious from the maps that the most prominent
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changes
has
been witnessed
shop, the elimination of walkway and the introduction of car hire. Most
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important
renovation is that walkway has
been replaced
by Sky train on the northern
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part
of the plan.

Looking at the figure in more
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details
,
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atm
booth has
been constructed
eastern
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part
of the plan for increasing number of citizen. The gates
You should probably use "have", "haven".
has
been set
up southern
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part
of the plan. The
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check
-in has
been replaced
by Bag drop.
'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
Cafe
`has been build eastern
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part
of the plan.
Interestingly
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enough
, the customs exhibited no considerable
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change
over the period and remained as it was.
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IELTS academic The following maps demonstrate an overview of the recent transformation of the southwest airport and it clearly describes the prominent changes.

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