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The following is a line graph showing the increase and decrease in wildlife population from 2017 to 2022

The following is a line graph showing the increase and decrease in wildlife population from 2017 to 2022 DYP6p
The line graph illustrates information about how many population of three diffrent types of wild animals from 2017 to 2022. Overall, it can be seen that the number of bears increased significantly in this period yet dolphins come down rapidly year by year and whales fluctuated gradually during this period. Looking at the graph in more detail, the number of dolphins population decreased significantly from 158000 to 12000 between 2017 and 2020, a decline of about 146000 in 3 years. The quantity of whales reached nearly 100000 in 2019 and the number of whales fluctuated gradually after 2019. The bear population has not declined during this period and the number of bears expected yo exceed 200000 by 2022
The line graph illustrates information about how
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diffrent
types of wild animals from 2017 to 2022.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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number
of bears increased
significantly
in this period
yet
dolphins
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come
down
rapidly
year by year and whales fluctuated
gradually
during this period. Looking at the graph in more detail, the
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number
of dolphins population decreased
significantly
from 158000 to 12000 between 2017 and 2020, a decline of about 146000 in 3 years. The quantity of whales reached
nearly
100000 in 2019 and the
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number
of whales fluctuated
gradually
after 2019. The bear population has not declined during this period and the
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number
of bears
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expected
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exceed 200000 by 2022

IELTS academic The following is a line graph showing the increase and decrease in wildlife population from 2017 to 2022

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