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consumption and expenditure of electricity

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the bar graph illustrates the utilization and production of the top ten countries around the world in the year 2014. Overall, the consumption and expenditure of electrical energy declined drastically for the list given. Furthermore, the usage and production of all the mentioned countries the intake of electricity are less than production except for Germany the scenario is reversed. China tops the list with 5398KWH production units and 5322 KHW expenditure units, followed by the United States with the 4099units in production and 3866 units in utilization. Russia third on the list with production and expenditure almost three times less than the United States(1057 and 1038 respectively). Japan with 936. 2 production units and 856. 7 expenditure units makes it the fourth on the list followed by India with a slight difference in both given values(871 productions and 698. 8 consumption). Canada with 618. 9 production units and 499. 9 utilization units stands at number six followed by France with 561. 2 and 462. 9 production and expenditure units respectively. Germany just behind Brazil(530. 7 productions and 455. 8 expenditure) is producing 526. 6 and utilizing 582. 5 makes it the only country with higher consumption and less production whereas the Korea Republic at the bottom of the list has a production value of 485. 1 and expenditure value of 449. 5.
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bar graph illustrates the utilization and
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of the top ten countries around the world in the year 2014.
Overall
, the consumption and
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expenditure
of electrical energy declined
drastically
for the
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list
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of all the mentioned countries the intake of electricity are less than
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except for
Germany the scenario
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. China tops the
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with 5398KWH
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and 5322
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, followed by the United States with the
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4099units
in
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and 3866
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in utilization. Russia third on the
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with
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and
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almost three times less than the United States(1057 and 1038
respectively
). Japan with 936. 2
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production
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and 856. 7
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it the fourth on the
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followed by India with a slight difference in both
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values(871
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and 698. 8 consumption). Canada with 618. 9
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and 499. 9 utilization
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stands at number six followed by France with 561. 2 and 462. 9
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and
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behind Brazil(530. 7
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and 455. 8
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is producing 526. 6 and utilizing 582. 5
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country with higher consumption and less
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whereas the Korea Republic at the bottom of the
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has a
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value of 485. 1 and
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value of 449. 5.
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IELTS academic consumption and expenditure of electricity

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1 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
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