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The following bar chart depicts the information about the rate of divorces in two European nations, namely Sweden and Finland, over a span of 5 years between 2011 to 2015.

The following bar chart depicts the information about the rate of divorces in two European nations, namely Sweden and Finland, over a span of 5 years between 2011 to 2015. o6KMg
The following bar chart depicts the information about the rate of divorces in two European nations, namely Sweden and Finland, over a span of 5 years between 2011 to 2015. Overall, Finland showed an increasing trend whereas Scotland experienced a decreasing trend over the years. Both the countries had fluctuations in divorce rates. Although Finland initially had a lower rate, it outdid Sweden by the end. Finland started with around 38% divorce rates which later dropped to 32% in 2012, only to get an increase of 7% in 2013. Later, it rose to 41% in 2014, followed by 42% in the last year. On the other hand, Sweden began with a high of 43% and got its peak at 49% in the year 2012. Further, it reduced by 2% in both 2013 and 2014 and faced a major drop to 38% at the end.
The following bar chart depicts the information about the
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of divorces in two European nations,
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an increasing trend whereas Scotland experienced a decreasing trend over the years. Both the countries had fluctuations in divorce
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, it outdid Sweden by the
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Finland
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with around 38% divorce
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which later dropped to 32% in 2012,
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an increase of 7% in 2013. Later, it rose to 41% in 2014, followed by 42% in the last year.

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, Sweden began with a high of 43% and
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its peak at 49% in the year 2012.
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