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The flow diagram reveals the procedure of handling laundry, including actions at various stages from collection to folding.

The flow diagram reveals the procedure of handling laundry, including actions at various stages from collection to folding. D97a
The flow diagram reveals the procedure of handling laundry, including actions at various stages from collection to folding. Firstly, the sample of laundry has to be collected from different suppliers. Then, it has to be separated as towels and linens. After that, the separated laundry is loaded into bags. Next, the bags are transported and placed in a machine for washing. The clothes undergo washing for 2 hours, and at the same time by pressing the laundry, the water is partially drained. Till now, the process is the same for both towels and linens. In the case of towels, these are dried completely in the laundry machine and transported to the folding machine. However, in the case of linens, after partially dried in a machine the water is not completely removed. In the next stage, the linens are left half-wet and send for iron. Here the linens undergo an ironing process. Finally, both towels and linens are transported to the folding machine, where clothes are folded. Now, the laundry is ready to use.
The flow diagram reveals the procedure of handling
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laundry
, including actions at various stages from collection to folding.

Firstly
, the sample of
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laundry
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has to
be collected
from
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different
suppliers. Then, it
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has to
be separated
as
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towels
and
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linens
. After that, the separated
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laundry
is loaded
into bags.
Next
, the bags
are transported
and placed in a
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machine
for washing. The clothes undergo washing for 2 hours, and at the same time by pressing the
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laundry
, the water is
partially
drained. Till
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now
, the process is the same for both
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towels
and linens.

In the case of
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towels
, these
are dried
completely in the
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laundry
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machine
and transported to the folding
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machine
.
However
, in the case of
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linens
, after
partially
dried in a
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machine
the water is not completely removed. In the
next
stage, the
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linens
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
half-wet and
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send
for iron. Here the
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linens
undergo an ironing process.

Finally
, both
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towels
and
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linens
are transported
to the folding
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machine
, where clothes
are folded
.
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Now
, the
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laundry
is ready to
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use
.
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IELTS academic The flow diagram reveals the procedure of handling laundry, including actions at various stages from collection to folding.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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