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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comprasions where relevant.

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The chart illustrates elements of GDP around the UK between 1992 and 2000. Overall, it seems both have increased by the year passed. All the time the IT industry more than the Service industry. IT industry has boosted much more. While the Service industry has increased slightly. IT industry was around 6. 1 % in 1992. That was about 8. 1 % by 1994. It was approximately 6. 9 within 1996. In 1998 it was almost 12 %. And finally, it was over 14. 4 % in 2000. When it comes to the Service industry. That was almost 4 % in 1992. And then it was around 6. 2 % by 1994. İn 1996, it was about 7 %. Well, it was 6. 8 in 1998. The last year which is 2000 it indicates over 8. 1 %.
The chart illustrates elements of GDP around the UK between 1992 and 2000.

Overall
, it seems both have increased by the year passed. All the time the IT
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industry
more than the Service
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industry
. IT
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industry
has boosted much more.
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While
the Service
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industry
has increased
slightly
.

IT
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industry
was around 6. 1 % in 1992. That was about 8. 1 % by 1994. It was approximately 6. 9 within 1996. In
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1998 it
was almost 12 %. And
finally
, it was over 14. 4 % in 2000.

“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
it
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comes
to the Service
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industry
. That was almost 4 % in 1992. And then it was around 6. 2 % by 1994.
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İn
1996, it was about 7 %. Well, it was 6. 8 in 1998. The last year which is 2000 it indicates over 8. 1 %.

IELTS academic The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

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138 words
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