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Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. ARNe
The table give a data about thr sales fair price of coffee and banana in millions of euros, in five nation: UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in periods of 1999 and 2004. From the first graph data, The most notable thing was that, the significant change in coffee fair price, which was 1. 5 millions of euros then 20 million of euros in 2004 and in Switzerland  cost is double then on 1999 around 6 millions of euros in 2004. Denmark and Sweden as same amount a rise in there fair price which accounted was 0. 2 millions of euros with the least price gain over the period of 2004. In Belgium coffee fair price was 1 millions of euros and increased 1. 7 millions of euros in 2004. The shown in second table  labelled as banana, Switzerland was the highest trade price over the year 1999 in 15 millions of euros and gain around 3 times higher than 1999 with figure in 2004 was 47 millions of euros. Simillare, Uk and Belgium also again in 2004 respectively 5 time and 4 times than 1999. Whereas Sweden and denmark fair price was fall to there 1999 year fair price respectively 1 million and 0. 9 million of euros. Overall, coffee price was rise over the period in all region of European but other side of banana Sweden and Denmark price was fluculated
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: UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in periods of 1999 and 2004.

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cost is double then on 1999 around 6
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gain over the period of 2004. In Belgium
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The shown in second table
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labelled as banana, Switzerland was the highest trade
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over the year 1999 in 15
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Overall
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IELTS academic Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

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