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The flow chart show various stages of paper making process from waste papers

The flow chart show various stages of paper making process from waste papers OXmM

the given process is straight the information about the difference steps of papers making process from waste paper it takes total 8 steps overview, every step is vital for paper making process from waste paper in the first type paper bags are commercial waste paper is collected and all the collector waste paper set up at the one place for merchant now with the help of machine all the sorted papers going into the biggest truck by truck papers taken to the mail for further process all the best people which are sorted in a second stage now cleaning and coupling the waste paper after the cleaning and all the materials and into the delinking plant delinking plant divided into three big drum shaped box second last all materials and in the paper making machine for produce for a fresh paper in the last age paper making machine made a huge role of the paper and now paper is ready for use

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 process is straight the information about the difference steps of papers making process from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmisuse
waste
 paper it takes total 8 steps

overview, every step is vital for paper making process from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmisuse
waste
 paper

in the first
 type paper bags are commercial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmisuse
waste
 paper is collected
 and all the collector You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmisuse
waste
 paper set up at the one place for merchant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of machine all the sorted papers going into the biggest truck by truck papers taken to the mail for further
 process

all the best This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 which are sorted
 in a second stage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 cleaning and coupling the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmisuse
waste
 paper after the cleaning and all the materials and into the This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "delinking plant".delinking plant
delinking plant delinking plant
 divided into three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
Possible agreement error. The noun 'drum' seems to be countable, so consider using: "drums".drums
drum
 shaped box second last all materials and in the paper making machine for produce for a fresh paper in the last age paper making machine made a huge role of the paper and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 paper is ready for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use