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The bar chart demonstrates living issues of residents who live in major UK cities.

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The bar chart demonstrates living issues of residents who live in major UK cities. The chart show figures that is in 2008. The units are measured one-hundred-percentage. Overall, Air pollution was by far the smallest issue in all cities. It could be said that health service issues had the biggest proportion. Health service, Education and training issues had the majority of figures. Education and training issues were at the lowest rate in Manchester. Health service issues had the smallest portion in Glasgow. On the other hand, New castle had the most clear air. Belfast and Cardiff with the highest level of health services were nearly at the same rate. Belfast saw the highest rate in healt service issues, which accounts for virtually 60%. Belfast, Birmingham, Glasgow and London underwent education and training issues approximately at the same rate, which is the highest level. Manchester had the highest level of air pollution which is about 15%.
The bar chart demonstrates living
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issues
of residents who
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live
in major UK cities. The chart
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show
figures
that is
in 2008.
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The
units
are measured
one-hundred-percentage.

Overall
, Air pollution was by far the smallest
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issue
in all cities. It could
be said
that
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health
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service
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issues
had the biggest proportion.
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Health
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service
, Education and training
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issues
had the majority of figures.

Education and training
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issues
were at the lowest rate in Manchester.
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Health
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service
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issues
had the smallest portion in Glasgow.
On the other hand
, New castle had the most
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clear
air. Belfast and Cardiff with the highest level of
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health
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services
were
nearly
at the same rate.

Belfast
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saw
the highest rate in
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healt
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service
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issues
, which accounts for
virtually
60%.
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Belfast
, Birmingham, Glasgow and London underwent education and training
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issues
approximately at the same rate, which is the highest level. Manchester had the highest level of air pollution which is about 15%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart demonstrates living issues of residents who live in major UK cities.

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4 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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