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The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the iformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the iformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 6AV3

This task contains two piecharts. One of them demonstrates the using of energy in Australia for household purpose and another one indicates the emission of greenhouse gas for that purpose. According to the first figure, the energy are using mostly in heating purpose and that is 42%. The second most using sector is water heating purpose and that is 30%. And the energy using of refrigeration, cooling, lighting, other appliances are respectively 7, 2, 4 and 15%. In proportion to second chart, greenhouse gas mostly emitted from water heating purpose and that is 32%. And heating, cooling, lighting, refrigeration, other appliances are contributing to generate greenhouse gas respectively 15, 3, 8, 14, 28%. Although energy are most using heating purpose, that is shown in first figure. But water heating generates more greenhouse gas. Another comparison indicates at other appliances sector. On the basis of first figure, this sector consumed only 15% energy where it produce 28% greenhouse gas. That means consuming more energy is not indicate producing more greenhouse gas.

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greenhouse
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