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The graph above show that about ethanol fuel. It's produced from corn. Corn from storing so that it's both make start fuel after then it's transfer milling from cooking. Cooking by water for 4 hours besides when it will be hot after fermenting things will need for 48 hours as if it's produced and meixed to do work better. When this will start the separating. In different typs making the liquid which will be solid by product in make better purifying ethanol for 5 hours. At last that will storing and make it is going transporting. This way have maked Eyhhanol fuel is produced from corn. Physical strength is mostly important for our health. It's benefit to our body make perfect and nice looking. Physical strength is nesessary for success in different way as sport, walk, swim, run and mental strength etc. But my poin of view about two types of people as 1. Sport 2. Mental strength. and i will discuessed both views. Sport is more then benefitfor physical strength. When some people has gone to the sport thier hands, legs and fully body is making a blood circle. That is our skin make a better. Most of time our health inside is keep diseases. our body is weak when you started sport then remove a lot of diseases and sport is very helpful for make sure our healty good. An another mental strength is very nesessary for our health. it's give our phyical so much comfortable. When you mental strength will do work then you feel like very quite good. some people this things have take part in daily life. Besides people used to everyday. Our body face to a lot of problems as mentally. when you will be start mental stregth then your mind is going to be freesh and your every problem will be solve. So i think mental strength is very important as a important sport strength. Both views people used to fifty-fifty. Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. But not more important i think two things are same.
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