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The chart below shows the proportion of graduate from brighton university in 2019 entering different emplyoment sectors .

The chart below shows the proportion of graduate from brighton university in 2019 entering different emplyoment sectors. nl7R
The percentiple of carrier choice of Brighton university graduates in 2019 is represented by rendered pie chat. Overall, it is apparent that service industry and manufacturing industry were the most popular choice in sport and charity. By having breif look on the percentile of choice of graduates in 2019, it is clearly seen that transportation, warehousing and science, technology showed approximately similar percentage. Futhermore, the percentage of civil service and other recorded as 5. 6% and 2. 8% respectively. In addtion to it, service industry recognised as highest percentage as compared to other sectors. The charity and sport were not more than 1%. Likewise, only 12% pupils choosed politics and government. Atlast, the manufacture industry amd education recorded as significant percentile that was 16. 3% and 14. 7% respectively.
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of carrier choice of Brighton university graduates in 2019
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, it is apparent that service
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and manufacturing
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were the most popular choice in sport and charity. By having
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look on the percentile of choice of graduates in 2019, it is
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that transportation, warehousing and science, technology
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approximately similar percentage.
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, the percentage of civil service and other recorded as 5. 6% and 2. 8%
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to it, service
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as highest percentage as compared to other sectors. The charity and sport were not more than 1%.
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12% pupils
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politics and
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, the manufacture
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education recorded as significant percentile that was 16. 3% and 14. 7%
respectively
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the proportion of graduate from brighton university in 2019 entering different emplyoment sectors.

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