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The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. 9yBp
The given butterfly charts illustrate the proportion of males and females who do housework, and the average time both genders give to household chores. It is clear from both charts that cooking and cleaning are done by more women and men, and these tasks demand more time of both genders per day than the other two tasks, which are caring for pets and doing household repairs. More females than males do cooking and cleaning. The percentage of women involved in these two tasks is 80% and 60% respectively, which is 20% more for each task than men. Almost equal percentage (20-22%) of men and women are involved in pet care. Almost double men (18%) than women (9%) are involved in house repairs. As far as the average time spent on cooking and cleaning is concerned, here too women outstrip men by spending approximately 20 minutes more on each task per day than men. Both, males and females spend on an average 20 minutes per day on pet care. Women spend approximately 5 minutes per day, whereas men spend three times more time on house repairs. Overall, apart from house repairs, in all the given household chores, women take the lead.
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butterfly charts illustrate the proportion of males and females who do housework,

and the average
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time
both genders give to household chores. It is
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clear
from both charts
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that


cooking and cleaning
are done
by more
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women
and
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men
, and these
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tasks
demand more time

of both genders per day than the other two
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tasks
, which are caring for pets and doing

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household
repairs.

More females than males
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do cooking
and cleaning. The percentage of
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women
involved
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in


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these
two
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tasks
is 80% and 60%
respectively
, which is 20% more for each
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task
than
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men
.

Almost equal percentage (20-22%) of
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men
and
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women
are involved
in pet care. Almost

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double
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men
(18%) than
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women
(9%)
are involved
in
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house
repairs.

As far as the average
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time
spent on cooking and cleaning
is concerned
, here too women

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outstrip
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men
by spending approximately 20 minutes more on each
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task
per day than
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men
.

Both, males and females spend on an average 20 minutes per day on pet care.
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Women
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spend


approximately 5 minutes per day, whereas
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men
spend three
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times
more
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time
on
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house


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repairs
.

Overall
, apart from
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house
repairs, in all the
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given
household chores,
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women
take the lead.

IELTS academic The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.

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200 words
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