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the first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

the first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 6xLKr
The two pie charts demonstare the using of energy in an average Australian household and emissions of greenhouse gas from thr usage of energy respectively. We can see in these diagrams, heating and water heating are required more vim relatively 42 and 30 percent. To compare greenhouse gas emissions which used in water heating is varied 2 percent. in the next positions, the energy spended on refrigeration (7%) and lighting ( a tiny fraction). For other appliances demanded 15 percent. The lowest energy used in cooling only cuple of percentage. The greenhouse gas emissions are discharged by heating (15%) and refrigeration (14%). Gas emissions of lighting and cooling are discharged lesser gas relatively 8 and 3 percent. To sum up, heating and water heating are requested more ennergy than other privations and greenhouse gas emissions are more gas discharged by water heating spended nearly one-third, another appliances and refrigeration 28 and 14 percent relatively.
The two pie charts
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demonstare
the using of
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energy
in an average Australian household and
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emissions
of
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greenhouse
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gas
from
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thr usage
of
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energy
respectively
. We can
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in these diagrams,
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heating
and
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water
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heating
are required
more vim
relatively
42 and 30
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percent
. To compare
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greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
which
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used
in
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water
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heating
is varied
2
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percent
.
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in
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energy
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spended
on refrigeration (7%) and lighting
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a tiny fraction). For other appliances demanded 15
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percent
. The lowest
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energy
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used
in cooling
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of percentage. The
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greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
are discharged
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heating
(15%) and refrigeration (14%).
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Gas
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emissions
of lighting and cooling
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gas
relatively
8 and 3
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percent
. To sum up,
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heating
and
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water
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heating
are requested
more
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ennergy
than other privations and
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greenhouse
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gas
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are more
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discharged by
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water
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heating
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spended
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one-third, another appliances and refrigeration 28 and 14
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IELTS academic the first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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