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ratio of people arrested from 1990 to 1994 and the bar graph demonstrates the reasons for the capture.

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The following pie charts illustrate the ratio of people arrested from 1990 to 1994 and the bar graph demonstrates the reasons for the capture. Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of arrested males had dominated the ratio of females. Drink driving was the most reason behind the incarceration of males and females, which was closely followed by speeding, and few people were arrested due to no answer. Looking into details, the ratio of the arrested males was nearly thrice as much as the proportion of jailed females at 32% and 9% respectively. According to the bar graph, the reason for the recent arrest of females was doubled from 13 % to 26% of jailed males. Breaking and entering, petty theft, and jaywalking were also slightly higher for men, standing just over 12% to 18% for both males and females. Although, women witnessed the highest percentage of arrest ratio for drink driving which accounted for a massive ratio of 38% which was closely followed by males at 31%. we can see an almost similar ratio of males and females in reason of assault at 18% and 17%. on the contrary of no answers it accounted for a small ratio just over 5%.
The following pie charts illustrate the
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from 1990 to 1994 and the bar graph demonstrates the
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, it can be
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males
had dominated the
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of
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Drink driving
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reason
behind the incarceration of
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and
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, which was
closely
followed by speeding, and few
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people
were
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due to no answer.

Looking into
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, the
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males
was
nearly
thrice as much as the proportion of jailed
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females
at 32% and 9%
respectively
.

According to the bar graph, the
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reason
for the recent arrest of
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was doubled
from 13 % to 26% of jailed
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males
. Breaking and entering, petty theft, and jaywalking were
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slightly
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over 12% to 18% for both
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. Although, women witnessed the highest percentage of arrest
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for
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drink driving
which accounted for a massive
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of 38% which was
closely
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males
at 31%.
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in
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of assault at 18% and 17%.
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IELTS academic ratio of people arrested from 1990 to 1994 and the bar graph demonstrates the reasons for the capture.

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