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The graph below gives information about the main exports industries of Barama

The graph below gives information about the main exports industries of Barama 53n1m
The given bar graph compares data about the Barama's main exports from 1995 to 2015. Overall, Barama exported more textiles and petroleum in 1995 as compared to other years. However, least exports was witnessed in 2005. It can be clearly seen that, Barama's exported 9 USD billions spices, 12 USD billions petroleum and 10 USD billions textiles in 1995. After it, these exports decreased in next year and total exports of spices, petroleum and textiles was 8, 10 and 7 USD billions respectively in 2005. Moving to remaining data, in 2015 Barama's exported 1 USD billions more petroleum than spices. Textile exports by Barama's in 2015 was 7 USD billions.
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spices, 12 USD
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in 1995. After it, these
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of spices,
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was 8, 10 and 7 USD
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in 2005. Moving to remaining data, in 2015
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