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The process chart illustrates what items were used in for making the cement and cement aid to make concrete for building purpose. Overall, the cement production process have several steps that begin with mixing limestone and clay and end up with pakaging the bags of cement. The concrete production including mixing various things in the concrete mixer. To begin with, limestone and clay are crush by the crusher and it make powder that drive through a mixer that drop the powder into a rotating heater, where the powder is heated. Further, the grinder help with grinding the powder and after completing the process of cement making, cement is pack in bags for the delivery. To add in it, concrete production is start with adding cement, water, sand and gravel about 15%, 10%, 25% and 50% respectively into the concrete mixer, that rotate clock wise on average speed. This is the ending for concrete manufacture.

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, water, sand and gravel about 15%, 10%, 25% and 50% respectively
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