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The figures illustrate the amount of money expenditure

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The figures illustrate the amount of money expenditure which expended by 5 different European countries to buy coffee and banana from farmers of developing countries in the years of 1999 and 2004. The initial impression from the figures is that the amount of money expenditure on buying coffee in all countries and, on buying bananas in all countries except Sweden and Denmark experienced increasing in 2004 in comparison to 1990. The most important facts the coffee graph provides are that, in 1999, the highest amount belongs to Switzerland which accounts for 3 million euros, on the contrary, in 2004, the UK was the highest coffee buyer and the amount stands at 20 million euros which are approximately more 10 times higher than 1999. In 2004, Switzerland and told him rise almost twice of the amount of money for from 3 million and €1 million respectively to six million and €2 million and order two countries remained steadily. In terms of sales of bananas in these five countries, in 2004, the highest amount belongs to the UK with 47 million despite this amount, most increasing did not refer to the UK, the Belgium sales rate experienced seven times of rising. The only countries which declined the amount of buying in 2004, were Sweden and, Denmark halved the of the amount in comparison to 1999.

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