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Describe what you want to do next Sunday

Describe what you want to do next Sunday JwBqk
On weekends, I rarely get up early because I usually have nothing to do, I usually wake up at 8am, then have breakfast at 8: 30. At the end of the week my family goes out together. We go to many places such as supermarkets, parks, …. . After lunch, I usually hang out with my best friend until the afternoon. At night, I usually finish all my assignments. Usually at weekends I only have the time to do the things that are given in this sentence so I want to write down them so that I will know what should I do at weekends next time. No doubt there are many interesting things to do on Sunday besides having breakfast, resting until dinner and going out with family members. For example, i can go for a trip by yourself or with your friends and also read books or play sports alone or with my family members.
On weekends, I rarely
get
up early
because
I
usually
have nothing to do, I
usually
wake up at 8am, then have breakfast at 8: 30. At the
end
of the week my family goes out together. We go to
many
places such as supermarkets, parks, ….
.
After lunch, I
usually
hang out with my best friend until the afternoon. At night, I
usually
finish all my assignments.
Usually
at weekends I
only
have the time to do the things that are
given
in this sentence
so
I want to write down them
so
that I will know what should I do at weekends
next
time. No doubt there are
many
interesting things to do on Sunday
besides
having breakfast, resting until dinner and going out with family members.
For example
,
i
can go for a trip by yourself or with your friends and
also
read books or play sports alone or with my family members.
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IELTS academic Describe what you want to do next Sunday

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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