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the figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people.

the figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people. l0wJ

The chart depicts the outcome of a survey of 1000 youngsters from five different nations in which they were asked at what age they believed should be entitled to some responsibilities and rights. Overall, Japanese think power and responsibilities should be authorized at older age whereas the general public in the other four countries claim the age of empowering adolescents should be before 18. Seen together, marriage made up the largest proportion whereas the age of holding accountable for crime is the lowest. For instance, British teenagers think people whose age is 18 are permitted to get married, as opposed to 15 in criminal responsibility. Moreover, the majority of surveyees agree that teenagers should obliged to vote at approximately 16 years old. On the other hand, the biggest conflict of opinions is the area of criminal liability; for example, Americans suggested that anyone at the age of 12 must start committing criminal liability whereas Mexican and British belief is 18.

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