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The bar charts demonstrate distribution of UK graduate and postgraduate students choices after graduations who declined to start working full-time in 2008.

The bar charts demonstrate distribution of UK graduate and postgraduate students choices after graduations who declined to start working full-time in 2008. 1b2nG
The bar charts demonstrate distribution of UK graduate and postgraduate students choices after graduations who declined to start working full-time in 2008. Overall, continue to study is the most popular option for graduates and postgraduates while, working on voluntary based is the least chosen one for both type of students. Graduates, preferred to continue their careers on academic area, roughly 30 thousands, which is almost the half of them. Working voluntarily is the least chosen one by far, which is picked by 3. 5 thousand grads. Part-time working and not working at all are had similar popularity which is the around half of the selection. Postgraduate students career selections have similarities with the graduate students. Again, further study and part-time work have the lion's share of the chooses, almost by two third of thepost grads, which is totaled 5 thousands roughly. Voluntary work and unemployment numbers, show similar popularity percentage among the postgraduate students with the grads, which 345, 1625 respectively.
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