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The divorces in Finland and Sweden

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The given bar chart gives information on the percentage of divorces in 2 different countries between 2011 and 2015. It can be clearly seen that both states’ divorce rates fluctuated, however while Finland showed a growing trend, Sweden’s proportion gradually decreased throughout the period. At the beginning of the period Sweden’s divorce rates was about 45%, whereas Finland’s rates were lower by nearly 8 %. There were the biggest (just under a half) and the lowest (approximately 32%) proportion of people annulling the marriage in 2012, in Sweden and Finland respectively. The figure illustrated a steady decline to about 47 % in Sweden by 2013, falling continued to the end of the given period. The percentage of divorces was almost 45% in 2014, furthermore it hit a through in a year and attained about 38% by 2015. Proportion of dissolution of marriage in Finland experienced a growth by a little less than 10% from 2012 to 2014 and reached a value of 40%, however then it remained stable for the last 2 years

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