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the digram show the recycing cans

the digram show the recycing cans Mrekk

The given diagram depicts how the aluminum drink cans are reduced. Overall, the process involves 7 various steps which embark on sorting waste in the collection centre and end with sale in the drink machines. Looking at more details, as observed in the first stage, cans are categorized into two types namely aluminum and steel in the collecting place. Following that, they are transported by truck to the recycling facility where cans are crushed into a cube and prepared for the recycling process. After being melted down old aluminum in a high temperature, they are turned into a bar shape so as to become novel aluminum. As soon as the bar has been created, they form into thin seeds and then roll up. Subsequently, these seeds are manufactured into new cans. Afterward, these drink cans are filled with sweet-based commodities and ready to be delivered and distributed to shops and drink machines. Finally, the whole process is repeated all over again.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram depicts how the aluminum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsipalcoholcupliquorrefreshmentglass
drink
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
.

Overall
, the process involves 7 various steps which embark on sorting waste in the collection Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 with sale in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsipalcoholcupliquorrefreshmentglass
drink
 machines.

Looking at more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, as observed in the first
 stage, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are categorized
 into two types namely
 aluminum and steel in the collecting place. Following that, they are transported
 by truck to the recycling facility where You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are crushed
 into a cube and prepared for the recycling process. After being melted
 down This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 aluminum in a high temperature, they are turned
 into a bar shape 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
 become novel aluminum.

As This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as the bar has been created
, they form into thin seeds and then roll up. Subsequently
, these seeds are manufactured
 into new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
. Afterward, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsipalcoholcupliquorrefreshmentglass
drink
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are filled
 with sweet-based commodities and ready to be delivered
 and distributed to shops and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsipalcoholcupliquorrefreshmentglass
drink
 machines. Finally
, the whole process is repeated
 all over again. 