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The diagrams show the changes in the town of brindle and local areas from 1800 to 2000.

The diagrams show the changes in the town of brindle and local areas from 1800 to 2000. oxwJD

Overall, Brendell and local areas had been revamped substantially. Although majority of structures were remain similar, some structures had shifted to new places. To commence with, the town of Brindall which was located in south direction was expanded in 20 century and in final year it covers a large area of farmland which used for cropping. In addition to it, river stour was passed from Southwest to North-east direction which was extended till 2000 whereas the areas of farmland for animals was demolished to make place for Bun hill and industry in 1900. Moreover, the structures remain same till 2000 except industry, industry make more factories on vacant space in final year. furthermore, the area of Woodland which was at top of the location on the right side was shrinked in the year 1900 and in next century, Bun hill and park was built on the Woodland and take some extra land from farmland in 2000.

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20 century
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river stour
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make
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make
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furthermore
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area
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shrinked
 in the year 1900 and in next
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some
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