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The diagrams show changes in tool.

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The ostensible diagrams detail the information about the alterations in a prehistoric tool structure between 1. 4 million years ago and 0. 8 million years ago. Lookimg from an overall perdpective, it can be redaily apparent that specific number of variations were witnessed by a given tool image. To start with, 1. 4 million years ago front view of tool wss not in proper shape, however after this in 0. 8million years ago, its size abd shape were came in distinct way because beneath side of equipment was entirely in round shape and its whole picture can be compared with a drop of water. Whereas, side view of tool was much smoother in 0. 8 million years ago with narrow shape than its counterpart years of 1. 4 million. Finally, the height of back view was remained unchanged in both periods with 5 cm, on the contrary it was not much developed in 1. 4 milliin years ago, whilst in 0. 8 million years ago significant variations in the shape of tool were experienced.
The ostensible diagrams detail the information about the alterations in a prehistoric
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redaily
apparent that specific number of variations
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,
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8million
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beneath side of equipment was
entirely
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shape
and its whole picture can
be compared
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, side view of
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was much smoother in 0. 8
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million
years ago with narrow
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shape
than its counterpart years of 1. 4
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million
.
Finally
, the height of back view
was remained
unchanged in both periods with 5 cm,
on the contrary
it was not much developed in 1. 4
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shape
of
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tool
were experienced
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