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The diagrams illustrate the way in which cement is made and how it is then used in the process of making concrete.

The diagrams illustrate the way in which cement is made and how it is then used in the process of making concrete. O1Kd

The diagrams illustrate the way in which cement is made and how it is then used in the process of making concrete. Overall, limestone and clay pass through four stages betore being bagged ready for use as cement which then accounts for 15% of the tour materials used to produce concrete. While the process of making cement uses a number of tools, the production of concrete requires only a concrete mixer. In the first stage of making cement, limestone and clay are crushed together to form a powder. This powder is then combined in a mixer betore passing into a rotating heater which has constant heat applied at one end of the tube. The resulting mixture is ground in order to produce cement. The final product is afterwards put into bags ready to be used. Regarding the second diagram, concrete consists of mainly gravel, which is small stones, and this makes up 50% of the ingredients. The other materials used are sand (25%), cement (15%) and water (10%). These are all poured into a concrete mixer which continually rotates to combine the materials and ultimately produces concrete.

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cement
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uses
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 a concrete mixer.

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cement
, limestone and clay are crushed
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rotating heater which has constant heat applied at one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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resulting mixture is ground
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cement
. The final product is

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used
.

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small


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used
 are

sand (25%), You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 (15%) and water (10%). These are all poured into a concrete

mixer which continually
 rotates to combine the materials and ultimately
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concrete. 