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The diagrams give information on transport ABD car ise un Edmanron

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The pie chart describes what type of transports people prefer to use and the tables shows the reason why people use theis cars in Edmonton. Overall, the car is tye most popular means of transportation for commute in Edmonton. The pie chart shows that 45% of people utilize car. The second most popular means of transportation is th LRT, whereas busses and taxis are the main forms of transportation for the rest of people. The table provides information more clearly about why people use their cars. 55% of population commute to work by car. Secondly, cars are used a lot for taking childrens to school and business purposes. Taking children to school by car make up 45% of people and other one are 40%. Only 15% of people use cars for their shopping and leisure activities.
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most popular means of transportation for commute in Edmonton.

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