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The diagrams depict changes in the layout of a student common room over a period of 5 years.

The diagrams depict changes in the layout of a student common room over a period of 5 years. YRBrQ

The diagrams depict changes in the layout of a student common room over a period of 5 years. In general, the layout of the student common room has been changed considerably, especially in the central part of the room. A number of features have been removed and modified, while other facilities have been added. As can be seen from the diagrams, over the period of 5 years, the table next to the entrance has transformed into a shape from a circle to rectangular and has expanded a seat. In the right hand of the entrance, the last table is replaced by a bench for laptops. Turning to other features, we can see that, across the left-hand of the student common room, the sink, cupboard, bench and refrigerator has remained unchanged for 5 years, but a new microwave has been constructed on the original site of a bench. During the same period, a drink machine has been built in the left corner of the room. Moreover, the fridge has been demolished and replaced by 3 armchairs and a television.

The diagrams depict This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the layout of a student common You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 over a period of 5 years.

In general
, the layout of the student common You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
considerably
, especially
 in the central part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. A number of features have been removed
 and modified, while other facilities have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
.

As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the diagrams, over the period of 5 years, the table next
 to the entrance has transformed into a shape from a circle to rectangular and has expanded a seat. In the right hand of the entrance, the last table is replaced
 by a bench for laptops.

Turning to other features, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that, across the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand of the student common You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, the sink, cupboard, bench and refrigerator has remained unchanged for 5 years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a new microwave has been constructed
 on the original site of a bench. During the same period, a drink machine has been built
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. Moreover
, the fridge has been demolished
 and replaced by 3 armchairs and a television. 