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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagram illustrates the different methods and tools used in Cement Manufacturing and Concrete Making for constructions. Firstly, Limestone and Clay are kept together in crusher, which mixes and get Powdered Substance. The powder than sent into Mixer which moves the powder substance to Rotating Heater, and additional heat is given to that. Further, by heating the substance is moved to Grinder, thereafter by crushing Cement is produced. Then that is packed in bags for Marketing. Later, Cement and Water is mixed one-fourth in Concrete Mixer. By mixing sand and gravel which are small stones the mixer than rotates in clock-wise direction. By adding, all these materials with defined proportions the Concrete is produced.

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 methods and tools This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in Cement Manufacturing and Concrete Making for constructions.

Firstly
, Limestone and Clay are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 together in crusher, which mixes and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 Powdered Substance. The powder than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 into Mixer which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
moves
 the powder substance to Rotating Heater, and additional heat is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to that. Further
, by heating the substance is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to Grinder, thereafter by crushing Cement is produced
. Then that is packed
 in bags for Marketing.

Later, Cement and Water is mixed
 one-fourth in Concrete Mixer. By mixing sand and gravel which are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stones the mixer than rotates in clock-wise direction. By adding, all these materials with defined proportions the Concrete is produced
. 