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the diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56WmB
The diagrams demonstrate the cement production tools and step by step instruction, and then how concrete is produced by cement for goals of construction. Overview, cement is made of limestone and clay with equipment and then it is altered to concrete with the determinate percentage of cement and water. Cement production, to begin with, limestone and clay are poured into the crusher and then is changed to powder. The powder is sent onto the big mixer. It is crossed a tube and entered in the rotating heater. When the material is within the rotating heater, is heated by fire. Then, the powder is ejected on the grinder, therefore, is changed to cement. Finally, the cement is produced. And next, it is put in to bags. Concrete is provided from cement and water. At first, 15 percent of cement, 10 percent water, next 25 percent sand with 50 percent gravel are dropped into the concrete mixer. The mixer is rotated with materials and concrete is ready.
The diagrams demonstrate the
cement
production tools and
step by step
instruction, and then how concrete
is produced
by
cement
for goals of construction.

Overview,
cement
is made
of limestone and clay with equipment and then it
is altered
to concrete with the determinate percentage of
cement
and water.

Cement production, to
begin
with, limestone and clay
are poured
into the crusher and then is
changed
to powder. The powder is
sent
onto the
big
mixer. It
is crossed
a tube and
entered in the rotating
heater. When the material is within the rotating heater,
is heated
by fire. Then, the powder
is ejected
on the grinder,
therefore
, is
changed
to
cement
.
Finally
, the
cement
is produced
. And
next
, it
is put
in to bags.

Concrete
is provided
from
cement
and water. At
first
, 15
percent
of
cement
, 10
percent
water,
next
25
percent
sand with 50
percent
gravel
are dropped
into the concrete mixer. The mixer
is rotated
with materials and concrete is ready.
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IELTS academic the diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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