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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. QLlVx
Thee diagrams illustrates that how wave energy machine generates electricity and location options for wave energy machines where it is showing installation costs and output of depending on the size of waves. Overall, a wave energy machine requires two chambers and waves and an output for electricity generation. The first diagram shows wave direction and water levels are needed and these wate vapours up and this air blows out into turbine and there are two inlets for air flow and also one turbine which lets air to blew out. The second diagram is showing that wave energy machines and its location options in which large waves gives large output for wave energy machines and also high installation costs whereas small waves gives snaller output with low installation costs
Thee diagrams illustrates that how
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generates electricity and location options for
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where it is showing installation costs and
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output
of depending on the size of
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.
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, a
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requires two chambers and
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and an
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output
for electricity generation.

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direction and water levels
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and these
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vapours
up and this air blows out into turbine and there are two inlets for air flow and
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one turbine which
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lets
air to blew out.

The second diagram is showing that
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and its location options in which large
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gives large
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for
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gives
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with low installation costs

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
127 words
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