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. The charts give information about internet browser use over a period of eight years.

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The pie charts reveal statistics for the number of people using four factors of the Internet to search for information from 2010 to 2016. It is clear from the charts that the percentage of people using Google Chrome and Safari went up gradually, while the rate for Firefox and Internet Explorer witnessed the decline over the whole period. Besides, people tended to choose Google Chrome as the most popular research tool in all years. At the beginning of the period, Google Chrome and Firefox served a huge amount of users, standing at the first and the second position but showed reverse trends afterwards. In 2010, 32% of total respondents was seen in the figure for Google chrome, and this showed a gradual growth to 39% in 2016. Conversely, the percentage of the user choosing firefox witnessed a steep decline to 20% in 2012 and remained at the same level in 2014 before falling to 10% in 2016. In 2010, the rate of users tending to choose safari and Internet explorer was not high, at 25% and 15% respectively. Over the next 6 years, people used safari more frequently with 33% in 2016, making this become the second widely-chosen tool at the end of the period. By contrast, the figure for Internet explorer unchanged in the first two years then went down to the lowest point at 10% before climbing to 18% in 2016.
The pie charts reveal statistics for the number of
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using four factors of the Internet to search for information from 2010 to 2016.

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clear
from the charts that the percentage of
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people
using Google Chrome and Safari went up
gradually
, while the rate for Firefox and Internet Explorer witnessed the decline over the whole period.
Besides
,
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tended to choose Google Chrome as the most popular research tool in all years.

At the beginning of the period, Google Chrome and Firefox served a huge amount of users, standing at the
first
and the second position
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reverse trends afterwards. In 2010, 32% of total respondents was
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in the figure for
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, and this
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a gradual growth to 39% in 2016.
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, the percentage of the user choosing
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witnessed a steep decline to 20% in 2012 and remained at the same level in 2014
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before
falling to 10% in 2016.

In 2010, the rate of users tending to choose safari and
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Internet explorer
was not high, at 25% and 15%
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. Over the
next
6 years,
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used
safari more
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with 33% in 2016, making this become the second
widely
-chosen tool at the
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end
of the period. By contrast, the figure for
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unchanged in the
first
two years then went down to the lowest point at 10%
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climbing to 18% in 2016.

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