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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. BOBa
The given diagram illustrates how the wave-energy machine is designed, where it is located at, and how it works whereas to produce electricity. The overall design of the wave-energy machine involved with many parts and which is completely depends up on the wave direction and wave strength so that it produces electricity. A wave-energy machine is arranged opposite to wave direction and there will be chambers, one of the chambers is for flow of water levels and the other chamber is consisting with a turbine where, there is outlet and inlet for air flow through both chambers. The turbine in the chamber rotates to produce electricty through electricity generator. The location of this machine is depends upon the wavedirection and wave strength. For this machine installations we are having two options. If we install this machine opposite to small waves, the installation costs will be minimal and results low output. Otherwise if the machine installed opposite to large waves, the installation cost will be high but as a result we can be profited with high output.
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diagram illustrates how the wave-energy
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machine
is designed
, where it
is located
at, and how it works whereas to produce electricity.

The
overall
design of the wave-energy
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machine
involved with
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many
parts and which is completely depends up on the
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wave
direction and
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wave
strength
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so
that it produces electricity.

A wave-energy
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machine
is arranged
opposite to
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wave
direction and there will be
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chambers
, one of the
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chambers
is for flow of water levels and the other
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chamber
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is consisting
with a turbine where, there is outlet and inlet for air flow through both
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chambers
. The turbine in the
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chamber
rotates to produce
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electricty
through electricity generator.

The location of this
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machine
is depends upon the
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wavedirection
and
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wave
strength. For this
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machine
installations we are having two options. If we install this
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machine
opposite to
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small
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waves
, the installation costs will be minimal and results low output.
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Otherwise
if the
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machine
installed opposite to large
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waves
, the installation cost will be high
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but
as a result
we can
be profited
with high output.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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