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The diagrams below show the categories of work force in Australian and the unemployment within the three groups.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams below show the categories of work force in Australian and the unemployment within the three groups. rLrJp
The Pie chart gives the result of overview of an extensive survey carried out in Australia with the aim to reveal the differences among unemployment rates, namely, English speaking people, Australians and Non - speaking people in the stages of work force. Overall, what stands out from pie chart is that Australians are the most significant unemployment rate with the amount of just over three quaeters, while Non-english speaking people and English speaking people have 13% and 11% respectively. The fraction of people who live in Australia is the highest rate with 76% in the stages of work force. However, Non -english individuals have less than a fifth propotion. Tge remaining just over one in ten is allocated to English speaking people.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the categories of work force in Australian and the unemployment within the three groups.

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