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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The given diagram of hydroelectric power station illustrates a detailed process through which electricity is generated. All in all, although electric energy is generated in a single power station, the intake of water is through low and high level reservoirs however, the flow of water is allowed at different parts of the day. Firstly, the river water flows into a dam and the gates of the dam are opened only during the day time secondly, on the contrary, one more source of water for hydroelectric generation is low-level reservoir where the water is allowed only during the nights. Mainly, once the water from both the sources are collected is then made to flow to the heart of the power generation mechanism "Power Station". Flow of water into the power station is monitored by reversible turbines that operates as generators during the day and acts as a pump to push the water back into the high-level reservoir during the night. The second component in the power station is, the generator which generate hydro energy and passes on to the cities and towns through power lines followed by national grid.
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diagram of hydroelectric
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illustrates a detailed process through which electricity
is generated
.

All in all, although electric energy
is generated
in a single
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power
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station
, the intake of
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water
is through low and high level reservoirs
however
, the
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flow
of
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water
is
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allowed
at
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different
parts of the day.

Firstly
, the river
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water
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flows
into a dam and the gates of the dam
are opened
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only
during the day time
secondly
,
on the contrary
, one more source of
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water
for hydroelectric generation is low-level reservoir where the
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water
is
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allowed
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only
during the nights.

Mainly
, once the
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water
from both the sources
are collected
is then made to
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flow
to the heart of the
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power
generation mechanism
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Power Station
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.
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Flow
of
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water
into the
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power
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station
is monitored
by reversible turbines that operates as generators during the day and acts as a pump to push the
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water
back into the high-level reservoir during the night. The second component in the
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power
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station
is, the generator which generate hydro energy and passes on to the cities and towns through
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power
lines followed by national grid.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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