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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. kV6N
The given flowchart illustrates the process of ethanol fuel production from corn. On the starting phase of production, the raw material for fuel, Corn will be stored into the storing room and then all corn will be goes into the milling where the corn peas getting from the corn with the removing wastage from it. After that, all the peas of corn goes to cooking section, where water will be added for the moisturizing which helps peas to perishing easily. After the cooking, all cooked corn peas will be fermenting about approximately 2 days, where the two product will be stored into different store room, one product is liquid which is proceeding further to getting fuel; other is by-product which may be use in the pasture for living-stock. Liquid form of the corn peas will be purifying up to 5 hours to convert it into Ethanol. The fuel will be produced and it will be stored into the storing area. Then it transported to appropriate place. Overall, it can be seen that the process of manufacturing the fuel from corns requires at approximately 72 hours.
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flowchart illustrates the process of ethanol
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fuel
production from corn.

On the starting phase of production, the raw material for
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fuel
,
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Corn
will
be stored
into the storing room and then all
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corn
will be goes into the milling where the
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corn
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peas
getting from the
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corn
with the removing wastage from it. After that, all the
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peas
of
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corn
goes to cooking section, where water will be
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added
for the moisturizing which
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helps
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peas
to perishing
easily
.

After the cooking, all cooked
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corn
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peas
will be fermenting about approximately 2 days, where the two product will
be stored
into
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different
store room, one product is liquid which is proceeding
further
to getting
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fuel
; other is by-product which may be
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use
in the pasture for living-stock. Liquid form of the
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corn
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peas
will be purifying up to 5 hours to convert it into Ethanol. The
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fuel
will
be produced
and it will
be stored
into the storing area. Then it transported to appropriate place.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the process of manufacturing the
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fuel
from
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corns
requires at approximately 72 hours.
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