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Milton Park from 2010 to 2016.

Milton Park from 2010 to 2016. W5eeD
The maps illustrate the changes that took place in the Milton Park from 2010 to 2016. Overall, a massive transformation can be seen in the Milton Park from 2010 to 2016. Towards the north side of the park ice-cream and toy shops are constructed near the boating lake, although the café remains the same in both the years. The fields towards the west were cut down to construct picnic and playground area covering almost half of the west side. However, towards the east the woods were cut down to make way for adventure play area and mini golf. The path has been extended that is dividing the adventure and mini golf area. Likewise, In 2010 there was a small pond next to the woods but now in 2016 it has been expanded in a large boating area. The Milton Park of the present is more developed, and constructed in a planned manner.
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Park
from 2010 to 2016.

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, a massive transformation can be
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seen
in the Milton
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Park
from 2010 to 2016. Towards the north side of the
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park
ice-cream and toy shops
are constructed
near the boating lake, although the café remains the same in both the years. The fields towards the west were
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cut
down to construct picnic and playground area covering almost half of the west side.

However
, towards the east the woods were
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cut
down to
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way for adventure play area and mini golf. The path has
been extended
that is
dividing the adventure and mini golf area.
Likewise
, In 2010

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small
pond
next
to the woods
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now
in 2016 it has
been expanded
in a large boating area.

The Milton
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Park
of the present is more developed, and constructed in a planned manner.

IELTS academic Milton Park from 2010 to 2016.

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152 words
6.0
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